Help needed please lyricists. Thank you.

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terrysains

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« on: November 20, 2013, 06:40:26 AM »
I'm writing a new song for my new granddaughter Kyra and need a few lines to add, if you can, and also in need of a big finish?

Thank you for your time. Terry.


I JUST CAN‘T WAIT.

I…. just… can’t.. wait…. to celebrate
All the love I feel for you I couldn’t estimate
I just can’t wait to know  all is fine  
and to hear you’ve got  a name that doesn’t rhyme  (hello Kyra)

I just can’t wait to see your  face
and to see if you look like ‘Mace’ (her big sister Macy)
I just can’t wait to kiss your nose
and  to see you all dressed up in Nanny  clothes

I just can’t wait to hear your voice
And for everyone around you to rejoice
I just can’t wait to feel so proud
Just so much  it makes me want to sing out loud (Hello baby)

I just can’t wait to squeeze  you tight
and to look after you for the night
I just can’t wait to see your smile
and I can’t wait just to walk with you  a while

I just can’t wait to take you to School
And to teach you how to be nobodys fool  
I just can’t wait for you to know
All the love that surrounds you as you grow
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Laugh
Know snow
I just can’t wait to say hello
And to watch you as you grow
snow
Show you off
I just can’t wait to take you out
…………….out and about

Maybe baby laugh
I just can’t wait I just can’t wait I just can’t wait I just can’t wait I just can’t wait.
 I just can’t wait to see your bibs and  bows and to see if you’ve got your Mother’s nose (or your dads)
to hold you close
One fun

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« Reply #1 on: November 20, 2013, 05:32:24 PM »
I'm writing a new song for my new granddaughter Kyra and need a few lines to add, if you can, and also in need of a big finish?

Thank you for your time. Terry.


I JUST CAN‘T WAIT.

I…. just… can’t.. wait…. to celebrate
All the love I feel for you I couldn’t estimate
I just can’t wait to know  all is fine  
and to hear you’ve got  a name that doesn’t rhyme  (hello Kyra)

I just can’t wait to see your  face
and to see if you look like ‘Mace’ (her big sister Macy)
I just can’t wait to kiss your nose
and  to see you all dressed up in Nanny  clothes

I just can’t wait to hear your voice
And for everyone around you to rejoice
I just can’t wait to feel so proud
Just so much  it makes me want to sing out loud (Hello baby)

I just can’t wait to squeeze  you tight
and to look after you for the night
I just can’t wait to see your smile
and I can’t wait just to walk with you  a while

I just can’t wait to take you to School
And to teach you how to be nobodys fool  
I just can’t wait for you to know
All the love that surrounds you as you grow
-----------------------------------------------

Laugh
Know snow
I just can’t wait to say hello
And to watch you as you grow
snow
Show you off
I just can’t wait to take you out
…………….out and about

Maybe baby laugh
I just can’t wait I just can’t wait I just can’t wait I just can’t wait I just can’t wait.
 I just can’t wait to see your bibs and  bows and to see if you’ve got your Mother’s nose (or your dads)
to hold you close
One fun


I couldn't find much that I thought was missing Terry.  I'd be happy to help, but I need a little more specific guidance regarding what you might want new lines to reflect.
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terrysains

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« Reply #2 on: November 20, 2013, 06:56:16 PM »
I agree not much missing just hoping for a few more  rhyming lines along the same theme of, "I just can't wait ...............................
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all concerning the birth of a baby...and seeking a last line just to nail it, perhaps I'm hoping for too much.
I wish you well.

Terry.