Cool song, thanks for sharing. Very catchy!
Great guitar rhythm throughout the song. Vocals sounded very good too.
I agree with the 2 points Allan made, about changing up the melody, and the syllable issue in the second chorus.
Those "oooooh"s in the end sound fantastic, did you sing all this in one live recording, or did you edit them in later with reverb?
I could imagine this one going in lots of different directions musically, acoustic style as it is now, a full band setup, maybe even something more orchestral with strings etc... so good job !