Hi Keith
Where do i start with your verses its like going back in time and its still going on, fantastic feel of a flow, so real.
Im thinking maybe might need third verse but maybe chorus is to short, anyway, Paul Simon come to mind in verses, just my own idea of your lyric lay out.
The barker shouts "come ye all to the fair"
bright flashing lights dance across the sky
slicked back hair, zoot suit, green shirt
Getting high on the fairground air
Standing beside the helter skelter
Chorus
I want to take a ride, tonight at the fair, take a ride
Will I find love, take a ride, tonight, at the fair
The crescent moon is shining through the clouds
shining on the leaves as they turn gold
polished shoes, white shirt, black skirt
getting wet in the autumn rain
I see you laughing by the ghost train
Chorus
I want to take a ride, tonight at the fair, take a ride.
Will I find love, take a ride, tonight, at the fair