... or should that be "Winter's Nearly Finished"
Hi All - been having fun preparing this one as my entry for the competition. Because wannabe-punkish-rockers need love too... and a few vocal harmonies...
This is probably 90% mixed I would say but I think it is time for it to leave the house and be subjected to the good taste on this forum. It already benefitted greatly from the input it got while in the lyrics section.
Any comments really appreciated - the more specific the better!
Winter's Finished
https://soundcloud.com/lutehill/winters-finished-04-02-2016c/s-6UZNNIntro
Now that you're here
Driving all the darkness out of sight
V1
I used to wake
Shipwrecked on the icebergs of regret
But the glaciers I cried
Were vaporized and dried
By the Spring that started when we met
CH
Winters finished
And finally your daylight melts the night
I'm not shiv'ring round a candle
Any more now you're here
Driving all the darkness out of sight
V2
When I'm alone
Food and sleep are things that I forget
No more putting myself first
My clouds are fit to burst
Thawing all the icicles I wept
M8
The trees are singing,
The birds are turning tail
I want to cast the anchors off
And raise the racing sail
You laugh and say that yesterday
We hadn't yet begun
Spring's for learning how to walk:
When Summer comes we'll run...
(c) Adam Farr, 2016