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nooms:


lovely groove (a phrase i often use apparently !) but theres no other way of saying it ...nice synchopation is too difficult to spell and may not be excatly corect, it just feels good, found myself singing along to it..
loads bubbling up like a mini cauldron (wasnt she in coronation street ?)
theres a nice change at the end i thought you could have developed and maybe used a little earlier as a kind of bridge , would be good contrast and jumping off point back into the song..
but top marks everyone, bloody dressing room must have been warm & aromatic in this weather ..

seriousfun:
Got me boppin.

Nice feel to this my only crit was that I found the vocals jumbled. There was a lot going on and they wernt featured strongly enough in the mix to make them stand out. I know its hard to get everything heard when you have 1001 things going on, perhaps some level adjustment from time to time would allow the vocals to take centre stage when required.

But oh so original. I loved this, great lyrics and man can Bin play.

Allan.

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