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HenryOFarrell

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Telephone Box - By Henry O'Farrell

« on: March 16, 2016, 09:48:06 PM »
 Hello, My name is Henry O'Farrell and I am a 16 years old singer/songwriter. This song is entitled Telephone Box.

The verses tell two different story's of the struggles of being homeless. The second one and the chorus, sing about the struggles of becoming homeless due to a break up.

The line in the choruses 'I crumble like a freshly baked crumble' is meant to show how they beg to be accepted into society and do not get accepted.

https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=4ZjlwIr4AMM

I hope you enjoy!
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Re: Standby - By Henry O'Farrell

« Reply #1 on: March 16, 2016, 10:09:03 PM »
Hi Henry

Welcome to the forum

Please take a few minutes to read the guidelines for posting songs for review:
http://www.songwriterforum.co.uk/song-reviews/guidelines-for-posting-a-song-review-please-read-before-posting/

I have deleted your other post as you are only allowed to post one song every 2 weeks

Please also give a little more info about your songs and post the lyrics, which will all help you get meaningful reviews

It will also help if you join in with the community and review other people's songs

Finally, why not introduce yourself properly in the INTRODUCTIONS thread and tell us a little about yourself
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Re: Telephone Box - By Henry O'Farrell

« Reply #2 on: March 17, 2016, 12:04:25 AM »
 hey Henry. I really liked this and admired your balls for givin it a go live. Lovely melody and sentiments. Nice one and welcome.

Cheers

Pompeyjazz
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Re: Telephone Box - By Henry O'Farrell

« Reply #3 on: March 21, 2016, 12:05:32 PM »
Good job with this one. Powerful lyrics, and I'm glad I'm glad there are other teenagers here  :) Cheers
~Nate
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Re: Telephone Box - By Henry O'Farrell

« Reply #4 on: March 21, 2016, 05:49:34 PM »
Fair play for doing this one live Henry...not many have the nerve to do that here...myself included!!!

Loved the melody and the meaning of the lyrics...

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KaelJay

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Re: Telephone Box - By Henry O'Farrell

« Reply #5 on: March 26, 2016, 11:58:28 PM »
It's a new and refreshing tone, and stands out from the many I've heard.

There's a somewhat music-style comparison with you and Ed Sheeran. But that's a point for you.!

Hope you'll be enjoying in the forum!
Mikael
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Re: Telephone Box - By Henry O'Farrell

« Reply #6 on: March 27, 2016, 12:55:59 PM »
I really enjoyed this. Solid little song - good voice - nice performance. Just keep at it all things being equal I can see music bringing a great deal of pleasure to your life!! Best wishes. BTB
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Re: Telephone Box - By Henry O'Farrell

« Reply #7 on: March 27, 2016, 04:28:28 PM »
Thank you very much for all your comments so far, they have been extremely constructive and I appreciate all of your support.

 
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