Hi Everyone,
I would be grateful for any feedback on my song 'Find Another Way', which you can listen to here:
https://soundcloud.com/candeetaIn particular I'd be interested to hear what you think about the vocal melody ideas, as sometimes in the past my ideas have been criticized for being too naive?
I also struggle a bit with lyrics so I'd be grateful for an advice here as well (see below). I nearly always work with melody first and lyrics second, but I tend to use words & phrases that 'feel' good to sing, without necessarily looking good on paper (I don't know if that makes any sense!). In the end I hope to be able to make some sense out of the song - in this case there is a very loose idea about someone being denied their 'conjugal rights' and contemplating having an affair.
I recorded the song on my trusted Boss BR600, playing all the instruments and singing all the vocals myself. I don't use a click track but prefer to record 'on the hoof'. Anyway, I appreciate any comments, good or not so good. Cheers, Duncan.
FIND ANOTHER WAY
There’s so much, to think about
When the sun goes down
In my mind there is no doubt
With not a soul around
Life’s too short
I’m wasting away!
I’ve gotta Find Another Way
Find Another Way (Repeat)
“Is that all you think about?!”
“Don’t try to tie me down!”
I could learn to live without
Like a king without a crown
Life’s too short
I’m wasting away!
I’ve gotta Find Another Way
Find Another Way (Repeat)
Written by D. Newnham (2016)