[irwin]

I feel good about where I have this Song Lyric right now, just want to know if you guys feel the same way too.


Beautiful People
©2014 Irwin Abrigo
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(1st verse)
People oh people
(People oh people)
You are beautiful
(You are beautiful)
Without you and me
what would this world
turn out to be
-
(Chorus)
I love you
beautiful people
I love you
beautiful PEOPLE
I love you
beautiful people
I love you
beautiful PEOPLE
-
(2nd verse)
Living in this world
(Living in this world)
Every boy and girl
(Every boy and girl)
Known what their eyes can see
Is not a dream
everything is real
-
(Chorus)
I love you
beautiful people
I love you
beautiful people
I love you
beautiful people
I love you
beautiful people
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(1st Change)
Beautiful people
we are one
We are one under
the sun
So we'll unite
YES WE CAN
LIVE TOGETHER
(live together)
Your skin colour
(Your skin colour)
Doesn't really matter
(Doesn't really matter)
We have one blood
one name
and that one name
is the human being
-
(Chorus)
I love you
beautiful people
I love you
beautiful people
I love you
beautiful people
I love you
beautiful people

(2nd Change)
Take a look around you
you will see
All the beautiful faces
(beautiful faces)
Have a look around you
you'll see
All the different races
(different races)
when you're in a crowd
(when you're in a crowd)
Standing up proud
(Standing up proud)
You look so
Beautiful (Beautiful)
You you are Beautiful
Beautiful people
-
So beautiful
(So beautiful)
So-so beautiful
(So-so beautiful)
So beautiful
(So-beautiful)
So-so beautiful
(So-so beautiful)
-
Beautiful people
we are one
We are one under
the sun
So we'll unite
YES WE CAN
we can
live together
-
(Chorus)

[PeeJay]

Hi Irwin,

This has a good positive feel to it. Just right for the coming summer.

In the second verse i thought 'open up your eyes and see, it's not a dream, everything is real' or something similar might work better for the last three lines.

And later on the phrase 'your slim colour' didn't make sense to me. Change to 'forget colour' or something maybe?

Nice one,

Phil.

[Sing4me88]

As Phil says this has a great feel good factor to it and is timely in the run in to summer.

Flows very easily as a read but I think a lot of it will depend on the melody. There are some great very catchy repetitive bits that if put to the right melodic hook will work really well. Not too sure why there are 2 changes- I would have though one would have been enough before a chorus refrain and outro but you'll know how it all comes together.

[irwin]

Hi Irwin,

This has a good positive feel to it. Just right for the coming summer.

In the second verse i thought 'open up your eyes and see, it's not a dream, everything is real' or something similar might work better for the last three lines.

And later on the phrase  'your slim colour' didn't make sense to me. Change to 'forget colour' or something maybe?

Nice one,

Phil.

Thanks for the comment and opinion. I edited 'your slim colour' to ' 'your skin colour'  it was a typographical error.  I'm glad you like my song lyric.

[irwin]

Sing4me88, Thanks for taking the tine out to read and for leaving a comment. This song melody sounds really good. I am glad you like my song lyric. Thank you very much for your kind word.

Irwin