Hi guys, would love some feedback on this one. Cheers
https://soundcloud.com/yaargh365-1/deliver-original-demoLyrics:
Sometimes it's hard to be alone and I can't help that.
Some days it's easy on your own, but that won't bring back
All those missed opportunities and all those close calls
And I can't forgive myself for what I did to you most of all
Baby you got me and I all I can do now is try to be better.
You got me singing all these words but I don't know if I can deliver.
Some days hard when you're not here, sometimes it's easy.
Some days I live without this fear but it's within me.
All of those times you went away, all those times you stayed near.
I don't know what it is but I feel so alive with this fear.
I contemplate my future, falling upstream in this river.
You got me singing all these words but I don't know if I can deliver.
It's growing under my skin, I don't know how I can go on.
This stalling and sequestered heart hidden deep in the shores of its wrong.
This loving embrace that brought me such joy is now met with a shiver.
You got me singing all these words but I don't know how I can deliver.