Great images and I really like to mix of stable and unstable, which gives a sense of ominousness (if that's even a word). Great writing and imagination. This comes from a deep place.
Thanks for your comments Mike.
It all works musically. I rarely get time to play or practice these days but I will get there.
Ominous? This is the closest I've got to a, that kind of. Iove song.
Women and attachment always bring trouble. Still the stuff of which dreams are made. (!)
I think my GF likes it. She's not a musician, she doesn't know the difference between practice n performance.
I think she likes the words.
Lol. Deep... I don't think so. It's not daft, though daft certainly has its place. I get that a lot, that my songs are deep. What's the opposite of deep? And why would anyone take a pen and put it to paper?
Maybe I'm completely wrong, n I'm completely one dimensional.
And everything I see is deep.