Hey Dude,
That's cool that you get to play stuff live! I miss performing! It's been years now.
Yeah, u nailed it when u said this one's a bit raw, It adds an edginess though which is cool. I like the effects u put on your voice. The guitar is too loud though mate. It dominates the mix. I don't know what your set up is buddy, but id like to hear this dressed up a little more.
