Didn't like the opening but I had nothing else to do so I kept listening! Glad I did. At 30 seconds in it gets nicely into gear. Love the rounded bass sound, flat drums and steely, rock organ. Your voice works extremely well and the harmonies are a treat although I thought you could have used them more ... I was going to say ... in the chorus but, I'm not sure there is a chorus is there? It's not missing just ... not there. The lyric is focused and makes a point ... go with this guy and it'll be fun but hard Ooh err Missus!
I think you've achieved a great 'live' feel on this recording. Was it live? Also, maybe my memory is foggier than I thought but I reckon you get better with each posting.