Hey Adam,
Sorry I'm late on this one.
Was already a fan of the lyrics, now I'm a fan of the song too!
Really cool intro and lovely sounding acoustic.
It didn't completely come together for me until the first bridge, which went down really well and they were my favorite parts.
Personally liked the lead, thought it sounded groovy added something nice - doesn't always need to be the center piece.
Massive fan the style you're bringing.
All the best,
Scott.