Hi,
Here's my tune for STC's enigmatic dark words around betrayal, always fun to write to his lyrics.
This is intended to the 3rd track on my 'EP'. Its a ballad but tried to give it some power on occasions too.
Probably needs one final vocal take but would appreciate your feedback on the song, playing and mix.
Thanks
Neil
https://soundcloud.com/neilconnor-2/broke-in-two-demo-master-13-july-2015Joshua was a friend of mine,but more a friend of yours
He drank his beer in silence, opened your doors
He drove a rusty car, ....he never traveled far
On roads made of stones, wished it was tar, wished it was made of tar
And how come, I saw you two, laughing hand in hand
You said his jokes were dull, his was food bland
But I saw that look inside your eyes
Splintered my guitar, ground into the sand. Ground into the sand
So stop your thoughtless words and comments for who
My broken bones, will be your broken bones, broke in two
And forget all my promises, watch them dissipate
Lady it's all gone now, it's too late...
And drink his liquor, if you like, if you think
Cos nothing flows as sweet, as that bitter drink
I told you of wonders west. I told you, you were the best
It was my truth, I meant no jest. Now I feel the same, as all the rest
When midnight strikes the evening air
And you lie there a wondering if I still care
Look to the darkness, say is it's all fair
And the emptiness around you, I’m nowhere
The bullets on the shelf, gun burns in the fire
I hope you have your memories .....nothing's left for hire
So stop your thoughtless words and comments for who?
My broken bones, will be your broken bones, broke in two
And forget all my promises, watch them dissipate
Lady it's all gone, now it's too late...
c STC/Connor 2015