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Songwriter Forum => Feedback on Finished songs => Topic started by: RossBagley on September 07, 2018, 05:06:24 PM

Title: my first ever song "kevin"
Post by: RossBagley on September 07, 2018, 05:06:24 PM

this is my first ever beat so don't send hate or anything just what i can do to improve, thanks.
/https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8Hx436oi9go

Title: Re: my first ever song "kevin"
Post by: CaliaMoko on September 07, 2018, 05:25:50 PM

@RossBagley (http://www.songwriterforum.co.uk/index.php?action=profile;u=21275)  Would you click "modify" below your post and remove the "r" from in front of the link? I can't watch videos on my computer, and I can't get the link to work with the "r" on it on my phone.

Also, if your song has lyrics (I can't tell yet, since I can't watch), I would be grateful if you would add your lyrics to the post, while you're editing it.

Thanks!
Vicki