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The world's greatest lover

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Scottishkev81

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« on: February 08, 2020, 12:19:50 PM »
https://soundcloud.com/edinkev81/the-worlds-greatest-lover


I wrote this when I was 19 but took about 15 years till I recorded it. :-*  Finally found a nice vocalist to help me record.
Enjoy




Lyrics.

I'm not... the world's greatest lover
But I know, a thing about love
I know the things it could stand for
maybe someday I hope you will

I'm not.. the world's greatest dreamer
But I know, a think about dreams
I feel you when you are dreaming
Maybe one day I'll dream as well

Daydreams that last forever
Forver when your head in my head
One day we'll stay together
Together like the words we said

I'm not, the world's greatest thinker
But I think, bout all I could do
I think, into my future
When I day dream I think of you

Daydreams that last forver
Forever like the games we play
One day we'll stat together
Together when we're worlds away

But i'm not the world's greatest dancer
But I'll dance a tango for 2
I'll dance.. to any music
Maybe one day i'll dance with you
To any music..
Maybe one day i'll go dancing in the moonlight with you
To any music
mayve onday day I'll dance with you

pompeyjazz

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« Reply #1 on: February 08, 2020, 09:34:07 PM »
I'm really glad that you did persevere and record this number as I think it's smashing. Fabulous vocals and well arranged. Lovely stuff  :)

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« Reply #2 on: February 09, 2020, 12:24:12 AM »
There are some really nice chord changes and melody variations in this tune!
Must feel great to finally hear the vision you had for this so long ago, very nicely done!!

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« Reply #3 on: February 09, 2020, 12:27:29 AM »
What a great song. I'm sure you wouldn't want to but it's very close to Queens epic sound.
I could hear Freddie putting in those all important add libs,  the harmonies from the rest of the band and Brian May's searing lead break.

I often listen in to this site and never comment but just had to this time, realy, realy first class potential.
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« Reply #4 on: February 09, 2020, 01:04:05 AM »
This is a very pretty song. I'd like to hear more of yours.

You've been lurking and not posting much. I'd like to see a little more of you around the boards. Based on the two songs you've posted so far, I think you could have a lot to offer. Do you have any recent songs? And please jump in and review a few songs while you're here. I think you could be very helpful.

Hope to see more of you on the forum....

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« Reply #5 on: February 09, 2020, 01:47:31 PM »
Than you for the kind words.  It does feel good to finally get it recorded in 2016.  I did all the instruments myself in a studio with the help of a drum machine and guest vocalist.  ;D  Thank you Liz Jones

Queen is one of my favourite band so thank you very much for now making me imagine the man himself singing my song.  oh my god...  can just picture it now 8) 8) 8) 8)


I will take a more active role in the forum and it's lovley to find a great place like this.  All the best music is non mainstream that's for sure.

I will post some more songs after the 14 day rest period as per the forum rules.

kev xxx

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« Reply #6 on: February 11, 2020, 04:07:06 PM »
@Scottishkev81 Hi, definitely got a Queen vibe going. Very good song and the singer has an excellent voice.
Very good, enjoyed it.

Cheers
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« Reply #7 on: February 12, 2020, 10:34:35 AM »
It's just a great song. Possibly the piano accompaniment could be a bit more varied, and I could find some nits but that's missing the point. Very nicely written and of course having a great vocalist is fantastic. Great stuff and hope to see more of you around here.
 

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« Reply #8 on: February 12, 2020, 11:16:22 AM »
Lovely vocal talent there, presents your melodic ballad very well. If you could write such a song at only age 19 I reckon you have an innate talent that you should certainly develop. Really promising stuff ;)
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« Reply #9 on: February 12, 2020, 08:32:28 PM »
Bravo!!! Bravo and bravo !!!
A song full of beauty through a voice full of nuances (wonderful vocalist)

I liked a lot
"One day we'll stat together
Together when we're worlds away"
I did not know that to live we had to die so many times
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« Reply #10 on: February 13, 2020, 09:50:09 AM »
Nice song. Reminiscent of old ballads.

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« Reply #11 on: February 13, 2020, 12:12:31 PM »
A beautifully arranged love ballad. The vocalist really carries this to the outer stratosphere  8) Hopefully you'll post more of your songs  :)

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« Reply #12 on: February 13, 2020, 05:56:51 PM »
Wow, such a lovely voice.  The emotion throughout is very strong and engaging.  It was simply a joy to listen to this beautiful song!

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« Reply #13 on: February 14, 2020, 08:24:26 AM »
Thank you for the kind words. Am glad you enjoyed the song.

I recorded the piano part first so am now wishing i'd went back over it and made it a bit less of a guide track. 

I will post some more songs after some time so as not to flood the board.  :-)


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