Hi All, thanks for the feedback, it's always appreciated! It's nice to see there are still many good people giving thoughtful and supportive feedback on the site!
Cheers Suze, thanks for the kind words, you never forget your signature, right! Yeah, I originally had the vocal more prominent, but I thought it was a bit too loud, maybe I need to think again! I do drum a little but not to that standard so I can't claim the credit
. The drums are real drums looped so I think it sounds much more authentic than my previous efforts with my old studio
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Hi Skub, yes, get the Tears for Fears comment, I love the song Woman in chains! Thanks for your supportive comments!
Hi Allan, Thanks for your kind comments, see my comment above ref the vocals, I guess I need to go back to it! Lyrics are always an issue for me....... This was written after seeing a drama where the visual references and the emotion struck me and whilst there was a complete narrative to the story, my style is to try to capture the emotion and feel of the moment, rather than try to tell the story literally. Don't know if this makes sense! Glad you recognised it as one of mine!
Hi WD, thanks for the kind words. This is my first proper recording (two other rough demos of other songs preceded this one) with some new kit I got a few weeks ago, so really just 'feeling' my way with it. I hear your comments!
Hi Neil, I can empathise with the business travel story, been there, done that! Yeah I get the arrangement comments (see above). Since I recorded it I also thought of some high strings over the chorus as part of the development. Good to hear from you Neil! Yeah I'm old enough to remember Toto from fisrt time around, Steve Lukather is a great guitarist. Will try to get a listen!
Hi Cramer, thank you it's great to be back! Thanks for the comments on the vocal, I took more time over that element than I used to (that was feedback I had received quite a few times before it sunk in, but eventually it did!
). Don't mention the lyrics
. See my comments above to Monty, it makes sense to me
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Cheers all, and thanks again!
Jamie