Hey all!
I have a song that I started writing in 2012. It took a bunch of different turns and I finally came back to work on it again. Would love to hear your thoughts. As always, this is a build up and a listen from start to finish would be greatly appreciated.
Comments on the production side would be helpful as well. Would love to see how this sounds on your systems (professional and not), especially the ending half which has given me the most trouble.
Thank you so much!
Micky
Updated version:
https://soundcloud.com/micky-shiloah/im-fine-demo-21/s-RFYU0Older version:
https://soundcloud.com/micky-shiloah/im-fine-demo-1/s-yTYjbIt's three o'clock again and I'm here waiting for you
I should have known
You'd think I'd know better by now
But I feel like I'm drowning in you and I can't go back
I didn't ask for this
And you couldn't give me that
I feel a shift now
Guess it's a thing now
Chorus:
And I'm not afraid to be alone
I just didn't want to let you go
And I kept waiting for the night
You'd say you wish that we were more
But now I...
I'm fine
I'm fine
I'm broken but I'm gonna survive
I just need a little time
I'm fine
I'm fine
And I'm not gonna fight back
I'm gonna walk instead
And I'm not gonna tell you
That you make it impossible
Not to love you
But I'm not gonna love you
If you don't love me too
Cuz if you want this
Then you've gotta make time
Or else I'm gonna miss
The chance to make you mine
I was waiting every day
For you to come around
But now my stars have fallen
And my lights have dimmed down
(repeat)
I feel a shift now
Guess it's a thing now
Chorus:
And I'm not afraid to be alone
I just didn't want to let you go
I kept on waiting for the night
You'd say you wish that we were more
But now I...
I'm fine
I'm fine
I'm broken but I'm gonna survive
I just need a little time
I'm fine
I'm fine