Not much of a singer sorry. Anyway I put this on a different forum and got mostly negative feedback so don't expect much. Just want to know what's wrong with it. It's actually longer but the recorded version cut out a couple of instrumental bits
https://soundcloud.com/serotonin-17/charcoal-statuesLyrics:
Turn away to the bridge and count to ten
Close your eyes you'll never reach the end
You cannot escape your fate again
Once a memory with life and then
Blame the creatures that inside you grew
Retribution has no place for you
If you're lucky it's all over soon
If you struggle you are made into
CHORUS
Charcoal statues of apocalypse
Blue fire at your fingertips
Charcoal statues across the bridge
Faceless shadows dissolve in the wind
Eyes are open the world is gone
Somewhere between ten and one x2
Misery from above you drink it in
Plagues are manifest upon your skin
Bitter cursing of the fathers' sin
Bleeding close and from within