Hey Rightly. I too am getting a big Nick Cave hit with this song. A very good thing. I do wonder if you could boost the vocal delivery in places. Perhaps a little more bombast all around would give the song a bit more heft. But I appreciate you may lose something along the way if you did that.
Thanks for the feedback
@mickyplankton Yes nick cave. There are some similarities.
Like me, he's very careful with words, more so than Bowie.
I always thought Jim Morison was a terrible poet,
I've often felt embarrassed, those few times I've met a fan of morisons scribblins.
On the vocals I did do some boosting here n there. I know what you mean.
I won't go back to it, I'm learning with every recording (I think).
I used to think if I didn't have to play all the instruments I might sing like Terence Trent Darby or Freddie Mercury. With using a daw I'm more free, more free to discover new limitations. It's a new humbling experience. There must be a good metaphor for this, I haven't the time to find it right now.
And to think I want to start making video documentaries! For crying out loud I'm almost 50 years old! Will I never learn?