Why violins sound so nasal ?
I mean not always, but from time to time ...
Too monotonic, I mean lyrics are well written...
But you could have played with your voice more, (of course your voice is well-developed, I can hear that)
for instance,
when you sang the refrain "every time....., every time we fall" ,
maybe make it, well I don't know your vocal capacities,
but make it different, it was too monotonic for my ears..
Cheers