I find myself looking forward to your posts Olaf, and I can't quite work out why. It wasn't the turtle, but I do think this is the best you've posted.
You're probably getting bored of me saying it, but the structure disappeared after the first 45 seconds, which was a shame as you really sounded like you were going somewhere. I think your voice has potential to be very good too.
Definitely a step in the right direction mate,
Richy