@fischermans -
(listened on iphone earbuds on a laptop)
As
@pompeyjazz says no issues with the hissing etc. so many plugins try to re create it hoho...
lovely guitar sound, nice lead vocal. I think I'd ditch the twangy high pitched mandolin thing over to one side, to me it distracted from the meat and veg of the song.
Could do with a bridge, or introduce a bunch of BVox on the 'now it's too late'. It sounds a bit linear, there's no dynamic contrast, imagine a classical piece, there's so many dynamic instructions like crescendo, diminuendo etc. to make the piece look like a mountain range (sonically).
just an idea, hope it helps
Rich