Hi to all who have taken the trouble to comment, it is mucho appreciated!
@cowparsleyman , yep I agree that M8 could take another vocal layer. Thanks.
@CaliaMoko , thanks and glad you were entertained, although that's difficult to do, ha ha. I didn't notice that sloppy pronunciation you pointed out, so thanks for that.
@Younger Hills , cheers for that, glad to have a happy listener
@pompeyjazz , if you're interested in the South Coast franchise for the Emotional Breakdown Service, then it's yours - and of course there is a uniform and a van all included! Thanks for the comments. The organ though is just a basic GarageBand organ with a bit of overdrive applied, and I use it quite a bit. I keep trying to write this Millenium's 'Whiter Shade Of Pale' with it, as I am kind of addicted to that organ sound. But no luck yet, although I will keep you posted.
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@PaulyX , you are a bit of a subtle practitioner of clever lyrics yourself, so am glad to take these comments!
@Bostonfan2 , yeah thanks. Interesting point on the hook. The up bit is delivered by the harmonies. But we Northern English are too miserable to keep going up, sorry. We always have to come down! It's just how it is.
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@crystalsuzy , all very kind of you. As you will know, it is harder to do slower Quirky I feel because the melody seems to stand out so much more with slow tempo, whether it is good or bad. I'm so glad you think I cracked I this time 🙂
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@adamfarr , thanks, but don't be sad. It is only a story!
thanks for the positive feedback though...