[Doodles]

Hi there,

https://soundcloud.com/negativeentropy/daydreaming-on-a-sunday-morning

http://www.songwriterforum.co.uk/lyric-reviews/daydreaming-on-a-sunday-morning/

I picked up these lyrics by Tom Crocus from the lyrics section of the forum... and thought they had some great imagery in them. I had the scene of a postman doing his rounds under the stars, bumping into the milkman and bread-delivery man as he daydreams his round away. Turns out the scene was different - but I've had a go at putting them to music anyway - and found a vocalist to voice them.

There is a bit of rough - experimental editing in there (particularly echo-wise) - and the music is very repetitive, with the variation coming from the vocal... anyway - we would welcome your feedback on what we have so far.

thanks

Ben

[PaulAds]

i really like this, Ben...my wife does too...not often she chips in, either...

i think the mood is just right...for that gentle, crack of dawn thing that i rarely get to suffer nowadays and suddenly found myself missing

shaping up nicely 

[Morefrog Jones]

Loved it after 20 seconds - Super Cool and atmospheric.

[adamfarr]

This is great - I really liked the lyric and sentiment when in the lyrics section. Vocal really working already. And the chugging rhythm reflects some of that drudgery. I can feel it wants to go quite big at some stage... But can't wait to hear more.

[Viscount Cramer & His Orchestra]

Yes. Like it a lot!

Listened yesterday and liked it. Nothing's changed! Great feel to it and really good vocal.

Captures that little world of the lyric brilliantly. Great lyric Tom.

Nice one Ben.

[pompeyjazz]

Love it guys.great vibe .so good when lyrics fuse with a tune.

[mickeytwonames]

Just listened to it on Sunday Morning. Love the general groove - for my taste it's a bit samey fro a 4 minute song - needs tome light and shade -  not sure about mentioning brand names in songs ( particularly as they're both now owned by Kraft!

[Doodles]

Thanks for the feedback guys, much appreciated and great that it is so positive.  I also found myself strangly missing the early morning work Paul. 

I know most of you guys like doing your own vocals, but I've attached a link to the vocal gig for anyone that might be interested. https://uk.fiverr.com/mattjgreco49/provide-real-rock-n-roll-vocals-for-your-song?funnel=69b9ec64-5b92-478f-a29a-fa02ea0c5a6d

I think I'm going to take a break from this one before coming back. So in the mean time if there are any ideas of how I can improve/finish it they would be appreciated.

Ben