I AM usually one for a straight-up love song and this delivers on so many levels. I really like your music, first of - those double-tracked picking guitars are irresistible and love the simple strings. This ticks all the boxes musically. You don't go overboard on the arrangement and let everything have it's place and it all shines as a result.
Lyrically, it does the job, too. It's quite traditional and to the point which is nice. Maybe a little too much, though? I feel like it ends just as it gets going. You could benefit from a couple extra verses, or maybe just one, where the music drops back to just you and the guitar again. To thank you for what butterflies can do is a lovely refrain.
Because I think this is a great tune I am going to be more picky than I usually am with the vocal performance. I think you can easily deliver a killer one but you waiver a little bit in places.
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"Though it's not been VERY long/ Since I FIRST met you." You're a touch flat on the capitalised words.
"Even though we're far apart." You don't quite nail the run-up notes.
There are some other places where it can be chalked up to personal preference. Sometimes an uneasy vocal is intentional. But this are the places to me it strayed a little.
Once again, great tune.