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Songwriter Forum => Feedback on Finished songs => Topic started by: moraamarolaloba on August 13, 2020, 01:02:43 PM
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I like this song, it mixes the harshness of the behavior that many of us adopt in life and the sense of humor necessary to resist it.
The instrumentation is interesting and I think the mix is well balanced.
Marcus appears on stage with his guitar and I think the images are very integrated
I do not know what you will think about this song but at least I know that you will entertain and have fun
I am a liar,
I am a liar, liar, liar
why would I have to change
the truth
needs
to be dressed
in other colors
in other sounds
why not?
to see her naked
makes me so sad
What are my lies
when they perfume
even the ashes
when they give us
another shoe
with other ways to walk
I am a liar,
I am a liar, liar, liar,
taming reality
with the reins of my words
in her mouth
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Hi @moraamarolaloba (http://www.songwriterforum.co.uk/index.php?action=profile;u=21233) Another interesting video from you.
Great percussion sounds going on here and intriguing lyrics.
I enjoyed listening and watching ;D
Paul
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It makes me happy you enjoyed the song and the video.
The groove is interesting, yes, and I had a good time making so funny sequences... @Paulski (http://www.songwriterforum.co.uk/index.php?action=profile;u=19241)
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This is one of the most intriguing and musically unique pieces I have seen you do, Mora @moraamarolaloba (http://www.songwriterforum.co.uk/index.php?action=profile;u=21233) . I also think that the accompanying video is one of the best you have done. There is so much going on visually....so many subtle and not so subtle messages. This video is like a dream within.......well, it's very dreamlike. ;)
Great to see Marcus in there as well.....nice touch with that as his guitar always adds an important dimension to your productions.
You are one of a kind, Mora.
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@Unclenny (http://www.songwriterforum.co.uk/index.php?action=profile;u=22611)
Thank you, this song has something new each time I watch and listen, all goes together.
Nice to see you. Be safe
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Hola Mora
Another delightfully surreal track with a great accompanying video.Your songs are always so well played and produced (great to see Marcus on guitar looking very accomplished) I again loved the use of delay on your vocals which is very effective. All round a very original and professional sounding track.
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Very interesting indeed :) the guitar part sounds like blur , tender - oh my baby...
Anyway I hope you don’t mind me asking...but the song really intrigued me....what’s the theme / message ?
Well done 👏🏻
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Another really interesting track .... some great instrumental work going on in the background to compliment your unique vocal delivery and great video work really adds to the overall effect. Nicely done, Kevin
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Hola @Grubstar (http://www.songwriterforum.co.uk/index.php?action=profile;u=22532)
Muchas gracias, I like to use delay, I make it another instrument and it also serves as a bridge between parts that are difficult to join.
@Kafla (http://www.songwriterforum.co.uk/index.php?action=profile;u=6905)
Thank you! Mystery opens minds!!
@kevysc (http://www.songwriterforum.co.uk/index.php?action=profile;u=19775)
Gracias, I had fun making the footage!
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Yes I’m all for mystery - it’s very well done 😍😍
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@moraamarolaloba (http://www.songwriterforum.co.uk/index.php?action=profile;u=21233),
Always such an interesting and entertaining soundscape with thought provoking lyrics. Your a breath of fresh air to the forum bringing something quite unique!
Paul
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Thank you very much, glad you had a good time with my song!!! @Wicked Deeds (http://www.songwriterforum.co.uk/index.php?action=profile;u=19231)
Be safe!
Mora