i dig it.
i connect with the minimalism. it is my preference normally, in music, and most things.
chronicity - i ponder what you are going for with this. unsure.
at a few places, particularly in chorus, the vocal seemed to really jump out volume wise, maybe a bit too much.
there were a couple of pitchy spots vocally. you may be completely aware and ok with them. i generally don't mind things getting a bit pitchy. i'm sure a few listens and i would be completely familiar with them in this performance, and accepting of it.