That's an interessting piece for sure!
I like the harmonies, the brass things in the background and the piano. The guitar, however, is way too repetetive for me which makes the song sound a bit monotonous althought it isn't at all.
So I'd rework the guitar and make the rest louder
Thanks for the suggestion. A good one.
Guitar, though it changes, is repetitive.
I thought
Like when one looks at a scene of the amazing, mysterious ocean
the viewer's focus rests on the detail of the small boat.
The ocean is subconsciously appreciated.
I tried that approach.
There's also this thing of music being too giddy when it jumps about needlessly.
Still, as I said, a good suggestion from you.
Thanks for the feedback.