@pompeyjazz - nice work John, yip it has all the elements...
Lovely brass stabs, plenty of long drawn out lyric phrases...
Maybe follow the lead vocal with the same line ‘not so young...quite as much ...iron lung’ know what i mean? One on each side...
the picture had me interested, she needs a good old steak n kidney pud, i bet she cant hold that gun up for very long...