This builds really well and the synth orchestra at the end is totally fabulous. I very much liked how you built all those bright sounding synth layers as the foundation for the more understated vocal delivery. Definitely worked for me.
Good to see most folk mentioning the string lyrics, something you don’t always see in this genre.
From where it started, merely pleasant, to where it ended up, which was a bit wow! I’d say this was a very accomplished piece of writing indeed. Good for you 👍