Thanks everyone for your reviews and critique. As usual some very valid crits which helps me no end.
Wicked - Thanks so much, wanted a sort of dischordant feel to this
Vicki - I'm a harmony monster myself
I think I might have a go at some chorus harmonies
Kev - You could be right, think I might drop the volume a bit
Skub - Glad you got the 'between worlds' hallucinogenic aspect. I was trying to create feeling of sleep deprived delirium
Tim - Agree - I'm going to drop the volume on the synths a tad
Kev - Thank you, I enjoyed the rising chorus
Adam - Any nod to Mr Lennon is more than welcome, yes, "I'm Only Sleeping" I guess
Phil - Thanks, I'm glad I sort of met the brief
Bill - Thankfully I've managed to get my insomnia sorted out now - What a great review
Micky - Thanks
The beeping noise was from a sample from Computer Music mag. Good idea to introduce some more, sort of competing with each other
Laquila - Agree the chorus could do with a minor readjustment
Jamie - I can't stop
Caz - Thanks for the review - That's a good idea you have with the second "sleepy"
Yoda - I know what you mean, maybe just a little bit more emphasis ?
Paulski - I did want this to sound slightly dischordant but I do get what you're saying and It can sometimes be distracting. Hope you had a good kip
Neil - Ha ! Dwarves
BV's on the chorus - yes
Steng - Interesting comment about neck veins popping. I used to go really OTT with my vocals, singing live in particular. Now I tend to record vocals at really low levels and sing pretty quietly. I find I can still get the vocal effects by applying these after the initial dry recording.
A Big, Big Thanks to Everyone