Hi,
My second song on the forum and one I'm really not sure about. I think this is the third song I finished which was around a year ago and I've finally got round to recording it. The vocals and strummed acoustic are live and I've overdubbed the organ and dobro afterwards.
Any constructive comments would be really valuable to me.
Following some input from forum members, I've re-recorded it. New version here :
http://soundcloud.com/alan-walker-4/these-days-of-despair-versionOld version here :
http://soundcloud.com/alan-walker-4/these-days-of-despairIt's basically about someone sliding into madness through drink, drugs or whatever. Such a cheery little number
Dawn breaks and the screen door slams
Bourbon bottle on the floor
I can see where this ends
I can smell the sweet perfume
Unknown ghosts glide through my dreams
A stranger's scent is on my skin
Before I bet on what's to come
I need a coin that I can spin
I need someone to save me
The love that you gave me
When you were there
I need a lighthouse to guide me
A safe place to hide me
These days of despair
I never thought you'd run out on me
Didn't believe that things would end
Now I see what you've done to me
Bargains broken that I can't mend
Red rain falls from an empty sky
A full moon hangs by a hollow thread
Somewhere in another world
Someone speaks but nothing is said
Light is fading from the land
Black trees bend from an unseen hand
The world it slides away from me
It's slipped away from my command
I need someone to save me
The love that you gave me
When you were there
I need a lighthouse to guide me
A safe place to hide me
These days of despair