It's got a happy ending , I'll break my rules without one . I was lazy , but finished it . That's the good part on doing country music , you can be older and kinda get away with it , Alt rock , you got kids with new trends and your still listening to the Beatles . Thanks

V1
I’m still running jumping hurdles
I count my troubles by the bundles
A mountain of stress weighs on my chest
Next week I go in for tests
Pre
The horizon is a sheet of dark clouds 
I eat I sleep and every night I dream about
Ch
Somewhere south of a memory
I'm on a river with Marie
The moon is a bit brighter
The world a tad kinder
Time hangs like a vine from a mangrove tree,
Somewhere south of a memory
V2
The doctor’s prognosis isn’t good
A broken heart can’t be fixed like wood
A year ago I had my whole life to live
Now its Jack Daniels and sedatives
pre
She left me standing on muddy banks
North of where our boat sank
Ch
bridge
I'd rather talk to her ghost at midnight stoned
At least I won't feel so damn alone
Ch
Somewhere south of a memory
I'm on a river with Marie
The moon is a bit brighter
The world a tad kinder
Time hangs like a vine from a mangrove tree
I wish I could stay here for eternity
Somewhere south of a memory

A lovely tribute to Margaret. It's more upbeat than I expected..nothing wrong with that of course. Another really well crafted song Paul, and sung in your distinct style. The lyrics paint a picture so well. Love it.

Hi Chris,

Just listened to your song, love the energy, guitar sounds spot on, loved the whole mix.

Hi Chris,

Glad the link worked. Thanks for your comments. I am playing about with the mix so we'll see were it ends up,

Thank George

Hola @moraamarolaloba,

Just listened to your latest and of course I wasn't disappointed. I'm not experienced enough to give a deep analysis of the song, but I do know what sounds good and your songs always create a mood which I like very much, thank you for sharing,

George

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Well, me encanta your comment! That's the truth, thank you