Once again your music is really, really solid. While your arrangement throws me off every time, it creates an interesting flow and still manages to work. This is easily my favorite song of yours, largely because it's a rock song though. The guitar stays out of the way of the vocals, not like in "It's Really Hard" and the sound of the rhythm and guitar is great. I don't like the vocals as much. The vocal effects do not match the rest of the music. I have no idea what would fix that but they sound bottled where as the guitar and other music sounds open and unconfined. Also, the vocals are pretty subdued and soft in a song that sounds pretty rock. I would like some more 'rock' vocals. There are also a few issues with the lyrics.
"I Wish if I can make it go away" is poorly worded. "I wish that I could make it go away" would sound right.
"I thought our love is forever"
"Thought" is past tense, "is" is present tense, they don't work together. Both "I thought our love was forever" and "I think our love is forever" work together.
"What did I do to you ..
Was a mistake ..what more can I say .."
This doesn't really make sense, it doesn't follow. "What did i do to you?" is a question and the next line doesn't make sense as an answer or a comment.
"What I did to you,
Was a mistake.. what more can I say.."
This makes sense if that was what you were intending.
Lastly, "You're shutting me" is an incomplete thought. "You're shunning me" sort of works, "Shutting me out" works better. However, you could say "But you've leaving me" again and that works best in my opinion. As it stands now, that line shouldn't be left as it is.
Again, this is the best song of yours i've heard and i'm impressed with your musicianship and music writing abilities. Good job.
