Right this is my first lyric post up! Just want your thoughts and such! It falls more into hip hop due to the way it's wrote and worded and other various reasons. It's just a quick write up, done in 5 mins, just want your thoughts on what I've got so far? As I want to adjust it and make amendments based on views.
Cheers, here it is, It's called come calling home
INTRO
we all makes mistakes my darling,
just give me the chance to prove to you.....
VERSE 1
I know that I made mistakes,
With stakes as deep as lakes,
I was blind to all that I forsake,
And it's your heart that I break,
But it's also my heart in ache,
let me know what it'll take,
This whole damn head ache,
hit like an earthquake,
like a 10 on the ritcher, it made me shake,
so as I said, let me know what it'll take
So I can ease the pain,
without any personal gain,
Like a queen you reign,
my whole heart supreme,
You can see it through the rain,
There's no need to strain,
No gain, no pain, I'll never feign,
That this all takes over my brain,
Worlds crashed with the force of a cane,
So I'm gonna let this out in vain,
CHORUS
I know what I did,
It was completely wrong,
I'm hoping you'll feel,
my pain through this song,
So I'm going to keep singing,
Until you come home calling.
Till you come home x2
VERSE 2
I know it's not my concern,
I didn't mean to let you burn,
Took your heart and made it churn,
Like butter, I made you turn,
you look at me now, all kind of stern,
From this mistake I'll learn,
For you back is all I yearn,
You say there's no return,
Like the writings on the wall,
No stopping me, I'll walk tall,
If I'm knocked down, I'll crawl,
No time to stop, no time to stall,
In case I don't make it at all,
Answer my call, watch me fall,
I've learnt my lesson, I'm now small,
Just answer my phonecall,
Listen to me beg, the mall,
I'll do it where ever, your call,
I can do it in the middle of the whole damn mall,
Or I can do it to you at the ball in the hall
CHORUS
I know what I did,
It was completely wrong,
I'm hoping you feel,
my pain through this song,
So I'm going to keep singing,
Until you come home calling.
Till you come home x2