Heya Pauly!
First song in nearly a year? What's going on man, you've got a talent that needs exercising!
Can't be much better motivation to get involved when Skub's feeling generous
Usually enjoy the wacky concepts in your songs, but the fact that a 'love song' is out of sorts for you gives it an authenticity - and it's far from a straight love song - really original take. "If you can squint you can start to see" is a great line, was doing 'magic eye' with some friends (we're a cool bunch) the other day and the concept of having a clear imagine hidden behind turbulence is a great one.
Very charming feel through the whole song, definitely one for the feel-good playlists, great timings on the additional instruments, love that dreamy guitar tone and backing vocal!
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Cheers,
Scott.