Hi Everyone.........This experiment took me way out of my comfort zone...and loved every minute of it.
The recording didn't come out well, at all....but I think the concept's idea worked.
What do you all think
All comments welcome, and first impressions are appreciated.
Thanks!!
-Tom
“Better Than I Used To Be”By Tom Tognacihttp://soundclick.com/share.cfm?id=10812325V1
He started off a preacher’s only boy
The only time, in his life, he knew joy
But a gun brought his daddy down
On some dirt street in Illinois
He stood scared while he watched his father bleed
Picking up the six-gun at his feet
He aimed to have his vengeance there
But was too young to do the deed
He hung his little head in shame
And cried the tears no one could read
And while the church bells rung,
And while a choir sung…
…He swore, to himself, that he’d be,
“Better than I used to be”
V2
From the everglades to the desert sands
He turned outlaw, wanted, in the badlands
Some say the demons in his head
Fanned the fury of his hands
Yeah, the last thing Sheriff Dillon saw
Was the blur of his right hand
And while the church bells rung,
And while a choir sung…
...A tattoo on his right hand reads,
“Better than I used to be
V3
It’s a mystery that’s still misunderstood
It’s a story of how the bad was turned to good
Where a woman gave her heart to
The man who’d steal it, if he could
He was an outlaw, hardened by his trade
And the deal with the devil he had made
Some say she bartered her own soul
Others say, it’s how she prayed
Some say she was an angel
Explaining why he seemed afraid
And the church bells rung,
And the choir sung…
…he promised her, that day, he’d be,
“Better than I used to be”
V4
He earned the reputation as a thief,
A scoundrel who would lie right through his teeth
But, in that church, a miracle
Had turned over a fresh new leaf
Now, it’s said, he disappeared in ole Paris
But, it’s whispered that he died inTennessee
Where it’s rumored that his headstone reads,
“Better than I used to be”