Very nicely done. This accepts a tune well, and has a coherent, consistent message.
One nit -- I'd lose the "ocean" verse. It's consistent, but not consistent with the rest at the same time. The ocean is remote and open and big.... but it's often a different kind of person who identifies with the "oceanic life" than with the landlocked outdoor life.
The first three verses said "country song" to me.... while that ocean verse said "Hippy song." It will be hard to let it go, because it's such a well written verse... but it's my opinion that it limits your audience down.