Let the bells ring out and the banners fly...I have a song to post in "Finished songs"!
Thank you to Boydie for making it so!
The song is here:
The Mark of the Chains, and I'm looking for feedback on the arrangement, instrumentation, and production to help determine whether any additional tweaking is desirable. Please feel free to offer your remarks--good, bad, and even indifferent.
THE MARK OF THE CHAINS
Words and Music Copyright © Vicki Morrison
Instrumentation and production by Boydie (
@boydiemusic)
CHORUS
In my vision I see the mark of the chains
I touch his shoulder; I see the mark of the chains
I cry for the mark of the chains
Oh woh oo woh, the mark of the chains
VERSE 1
He could have had it all,
But he gave it up for me
Instead of wearing royal robes,
He bore the chains to set me free
CHORUS
VERSE 2
A love has touched my soul;
Turned a spark into a flame
And it's because of the love that in the dark of night
I seem to feel the mark of the chains
The mark of the chains
CHORUS
Oh woh oo woh, the mark of the chains