Hi greedo,
At this point, I haven't finished listening to this song but I was compelled to grab my guitar and search for the notes A G A G B that I could hear in my head, quite clearly over the words 'look the other way.' Hope you don't mind that greedo, you might want to try that melody or discard the idea without further thought as I know songwriting can be quite personal and suggestions aren't always welcome.
Now I've got that out of the way, back to the song. I like the gentle build up of the intro which is of an excellent length. The chord progression works well and it's a lovely snapshot of your feelings. The backing vocals work well. you might want to expand this song by writing an extra section, but there's no pressing need to do this as you've developed this song quite well using a limited number of sections.
I really enjoyed this song, which is possibly one of my favourites of yours.
Great songwriting as always!
Paul