Hey
ive written another song about loosing my dad, the last one was more about cancer, this one is more about my dad and the events of his death and after, I always like to write about the meaning of the song so you can relate more to some of the lyrics, when he died I was 13 and my mum woke me up at 6am and had to tell me,when they came to get him form my house I was upstairs and ran down but the car was already driving off with him. even thou I was 13 I managed to say a speech at his funeral, I remember everyone looking at me but cant remember seing anyones face I was in my own world, and the saying on his headstone I didn't really understand because I was so young. then when I was bout 17 I started to drink a lot and all the emotion came out of me because I never spoke about it for all those years. anyway sorry to bore you with all the writing I just like to explain my songs
would really like some feedback I know its a emotional song but I can take criticism and and suggestions on wording people have
cheers james
verse 1
6 am dragged into hell from my heaven spot
feeling betrayed by love the one it forgot
hand gripping your heart praying for a beat from within
that beat to say you never gave in
as I wave you goodbye one last time
you was in the car so I pictured you in my mind
chorus
I have whispered you a thousand words
I cried my eyes goodbye
I held your hand and felt your heart
now I look for your star in the sky
verse 2
head into the church to try and hold it together
when the man I adore is gone forever
can I face these faces that ill just look through
and speak of the greatest man I barely knew
13 trying to understand your headstone ahhhhh - this ahh is a cry of hurt
49 you didn't even reach the mile stone
chorus
I have whispered you a thousand words
I cried my eyes goodbye
I held your hand and felt your heart
now I look for your star in the sky
verse 3
growing up I should of had you to look up to
not growing up looking up to you
separated by planets, I know you didn't plan it -- or - I try look through the planets
guess god needed you up there god dam it
now im alcohol grieving but grief im receiving
drowning my sorrow my mum don't believe in
chorus
I have whispered you a thousand words
I cried my eyes goodbye
I held your hand and felt your heart
now I look for your star in the sky