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Songwriter Forum => Collaborations => Topic started by: Binladeda on October 22, 2016, 06:53:38 PM
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OK....I've got this idea for a tongue-in-cheek song about
the British transport cafe culture. Overweight truck drivers,
eating 'all day' breakfasts with greasy spoons.....that sort
of thing ;D ;D
https://soundcloud.com/binladeda/full-english/s-nOUeW
I'm looking for lyrics and vocals...of course ::) The mix
needs work, and it's too long, but there's plenty to work
with.
If you like the idea and want to have some fun with it....
let me know ;D
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Sounds like a nice wee tongue-in-cheek number. You might get some lyrical inspiration from this song that is based on a slightly similar theme:
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Okey it's an inspired idea. But stop look and listen because The Fall have already done this back in the 80s
Before you go any further check out the Container Drivers by The Fall. It is one of their most celebrated songs. You should be aware of it before you go ahead.
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Just to follow up to my last point. Your music is absolutely spot on. It's brilliant. Love the guitars and the vibe. just be aware of The Fall that's all.
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Hi Mickey,
Thanks for the concern.....but I've had
a listen and I don't think there's anything
to worry about. Someone is already working
on the lyrics and they're nothing like what
The Fall have done.
Don't fancy singing do you ? ;D ;D
Sing4me.....thanks for the link ;D ;D
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Anyone interested in adding to the lyric please follow this link
http://www.songwriterforum.co.uk/index.php?topic=12107.0