Hi,
I listened to this song 3-4 times.
What a wonderful gift for your grand-daughter to cherish for ever.
It’s a simple, heartfelt and sincere song, well played and well sung. I thought it was beautiful.
One observation for you;
The clarity of the vocals could probably be improved slightly. Either in the recording process, or by clearer annunciation of the words. For example; in the first chorus, I genuinely initially thought I heard you sing “she’s jewish, she is whole” rather than “she’s cherished, she is hope”.
However, that is just a recording, performance issue and it doesn’t detract from it being a wonderful song, and a wonderful gift.
I wish you and your family a wonderful Hope filled 2020!
Thank you for sharing your music with me.
All the best.
Paul.