Hi pnb99,
you have a nice sounding song here But I listen to your song I meant i really listen to it and to be honest to me something is missing. Right now I cannot say what it is but it is like I want to feel the aim high feel as i listen and I am not feeling it.
I check the lyric it goes well with the melody Yes!.
You have a nice opening first verse there, melody is great.
The second verse reads and sounds well with the melody too.
(Your Pre Chorus)
Pre-Chorus 1
I feel high, I feel low
One night down on Broadway
Too far, too soon
This is why they say
The Pre Chorus it is much stronger than the Chorus and that I can't accept (but that is only me)
All in all after hearing the whole song through it is not telling me what it needs to tell me about aim high, sorry.
but nice sounding song though.
irwin