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Come Back [WIP]

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Frogster

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« on: January 23, 2013, 09:47:52 PM »
Heya, it's just some WIP progress lyrics and I'd really like you're feed back. A little bit of context about it. One of my friends who's older than me, she's one of my best friends is moving on with her life without me, I'm not taking it very well and I need her more than ever right now so it inspired me to write a song about it.



[Verse 2]Cold Flames Igniting
Engulfing all around and inside
It's cold it's hot so let me out
Where are you where are you going now
What will I do without you
Please return to what it was before

[Chorus]Oh Come Back Now
You're going the wrong way - just turn around
It's not to late you haven't lost me yet
Be crushed now so you'll come back
You're leaving me behind in your life

[Verse 2]Don't abbandon me
You're moving to fast in life with him
He sits upon his throne
With you sitting upon his lap
I need you back, to what you was before

[Chorus]Oh Come Back Now
You're going the wrong way - just turn around
It's not to late you haven't lost me yet
Be crushed now so you'll come back
You're leaving me behind in your life

[Bridge]Turn back
Fall Down
Let me help
Return to your fullness
Help me return to my fullness
Without you I am merely paper with out pen