To my ears, it was beautiful. My mind would never have gone to "a peaceful cigarette break" while listening. I "heard" a little more drama than that, but that's just what it evokes in my mind.
This would be difficult to shoehorn a lyric onto.... but I think it could be done and might be good. Some things that are "take a lyric with difficulty" work really well when you finally find it.
If you ever want a lyric for an instrumental, let me know.