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Together - A love song

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Re: Together - A love song

« Reply #30 on: March 06, 2018, 04:13:10 PM »
Quote from: montydog on March 06, 2018, 03:18:10 PM
Hi,

This has a great vibe. Love the instrumentation and the lead work. Nice gentle feel and the sincerity shines through. Being a little more critical, the vocals are pitchy in places and the song lacks a lift melodically to maintain the listeners interest. Other than that - sweet song.

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Hi Monty, thanks for the listen...Yeah I guess your're right it is a little flat in the Vox, and yip they do sound a little off beam sometimes, good that you point it out to me, yes a bit sloppy, apologies for not picking that up.

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Re: Together - A love song

« Reply #31 on: March 06, 2018, 05:02:56 PM »
very sweet song
beautiful chord progression
well done!
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Re: Together - A love song

« Reply #32 on: March 07, 2018, 08:43:21 AM »
Hi Rightly, you always are so kind wit your listening ear.

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