Hi all, this is my new creation. Been thinking for a while of doing a prog rock type concept piece. So here are parts one and two of what will hopefully be a longer piece. Not the usual verse chorus or ABACAB type structure, but hopefully interesting enough to hold attention.Some nods to prog rock instruments and ideas. A bit of a 'cut price' Ancient Mariner vibe
.Any way all constructive criticism welcome.
Cheers
Jamie
https://soundcloud.com/jamie1802/the-journeyThe Journey
Parts 1 and 2
Dawn
Voyage
Sail away, eternity, till the end of time
No return,to find a way, will there be a sign
Forever gone, hope is lost, where else can we go
Find our way, through the night,a fearsome west wind blows
No return, no way back, life consigned to fate
Cant look back, time gone by, God guards every gate
Destiny,a piper plays, listen to his song
Carry on, brittle should, it may not be to long