[periman]

This is my first instrumental song and my first post in this forum! It is created in my guitar ( at first ) and then I remade it on computer in an orchestral version using MAGIX Music Maker. I don't have the necessary equipment needed for recording so everything is electronically made. I hope you will like it.

https://soundcloud.com/periman/magic-of-the-sun

[nooms]

this is interesting
very moody , the deep bass and the drums excellent..
the cello’s lovely, works well but it dominates and a little waring after a while,
cant pin the music down , kind of melancholy but ambiguous or melanbiguous to use proper parlez..imagine it would work well as tv/film soundtrack

nice work periman and welcome to the forum.
get yourself involved and im sure the forum will open up for you
good luck

[periman]

Thank you very much! This is exactly what i needed A nice full critique. I will be more active on the forum.

[flossie]

welcome!

The melody is nice and the moody feel to the piece is enjoyable the cello is too loud though and you have some timing issues. Maybe add some more variation to the melody or a new instrument perhaps!

Good start though and keep them coming

Flossie